First writing group meeting
Sep. 9th, 2003 11:07 pmOkay, so my diss proposal isn't nearly as far along as I thought it was. Putting it away for two months was probably the right thing to do, as now I see all the flaws.
The writing group basically pointed out I was biting off more than I could chew and needed to separate methods, objectives and background more carefully. Which I had allready concluded. My organization stinks. I think turning agroecology from a theory to a method of analysis may solve some things. Its still gonna be tricky. This is making me think I need to return to the simple climate change proposal, but in spite of its simplicity it really doesn't reflect the full range of what I want to include. Bleh. Well, maybe I'll read all the drafts and try and make a decision. I don't think completely rewriting is realistic at this point.
The writing group basically pointed out I was biting off more than I could chew and needed to separate methods, objectives and background more carefully. Which I had allready concluded. My organization stinks. I think turning agroecology from a theory to a method of analysis may solve some things. Its still gonna be tricky. This is making me think I need to return to the simple climate change proposal, but in spite of its simplicity it really doesn't reflect the full range of what I want to include. Bleh. Well, maybe I'll read all the drafts and try and make a decision. I don't think completely rewriting is realistic at this point.